People tend to
hate this book for two reasons, the first being the dual narrator thing. I can't blame 'em: multiple
first-person narrators are difficult to write and a pain in the butt to
read, especially if the voices are not very distinctive. She does a very good job of alternating between
characterization--you can open the book at random and know after only a few words
if you're in a Bart chapter or a Jory chapter--but voice-wise? Not so much.
All of Andrews characters use the same syntax and vocabulary. She makes
an effort by having Bart drop his Gs and use a lot of sentence
fragments, but for the most part, the narration is pretty uniform.
The other reason is Bart.
I'll make a case for Bart. He ends up with the strongest, most complex
characterization in the entire book, leaving the rest of the cast
looking like indecisive, oblivious milquetoasts with their heads up
their asses. A lot of people find Bart creepy and off-putting, which is
absolutely the case, but there is no denying that he is indeed Cathy's
kid.
If There Be Thorns is arguably Andrews' most ambitious novel
thus far. She's writing from the perspective of two very young
characters. There are two narrators who alternate chapters. And it's
the only Andrews' novel with male protagonists.
That
being said, all these things are executed pretty badly, though not all
that much worse than in any of her other novels. I've complained
before that Andrews is terrible at writing realistic children, and
males, and indeed human beings. When all these elements are pushed to
the forefront at the same time, the weaknesses are all the more
obvious.
Yet on a technical level, this is probably one of Andrews' better
novels. Since she's dealing with
a shorter period of time than the other books--a single summer, rather
than years--a lot of the pacing and continuity errors that were so
confusing in the first two books vanish. And at times she gives a very
clear image of the separation between adult-world and child-world, and
the uneasiness of children who realize that their parents are
untrustworthy even while they are totally dependent on said parents.
These are themes that were very prevalent in
Flowers in the Attic,
but here, she seems to get further under their skin.
Shall we start this thing? Let's start this thing!